Helljumper Training

[Tucker49]

Welcome to ODST Hell jumper training. Here you will learn how to make extremely dangerous drops into orbit, fight with hand to hand combat, and survive. What you are about to do is both extremely dangerous and just down right stupid. You will be put into a pod that it supposed to replicate the pods used to drop into orbit. You will get into the pod and when you are ready, you will press the button that will drop you 600 feet down. At one point the temperature will rise up to 952 degrees Fahrenheit. Don't worry, your suits are designed to withstand these temperatures, it is you that has to withstand it and not faint. The temperature will be held here for 10 seconds and then will quickly turned back down to room temperature. After you are done with this, you will be given a battle rifle and sniper rifle. You will have to snipe and kill 10 captured grunts. You have a 1 min. time limit. You must get an 8/10 to pass.

[Johnny Guns]

Johnny Guns entered the room full of simulation pods. He looked at the nearest one, it had heaters all over it and looked like it was ready to cook someone alive. He was instructed to get into one of these, deathtraps, and survive a simulation of a drop into orbit. You may now get into the pod and start the training course, sir. Johnny walked toward the pod that had it's hatch open and stepped into it. He fit himself into pod and it closed automatically. The pressure doors sealed and he heard the air hiss from outside. Several lights turned on inside the pod, and as they all turned green, the red deploy button turned green, which meant, ready. Johnny took a deep breath, and exhaled slowly. He put his finger on the button, and closed his eyes. Please let me survive this. I have to pass. Johnny shut his eyes tight and pushed the button. He suddenly felt gravity leave him and and felt himself being tugged upward as he fell down. As his body caught up with the pod falling down, he opened his eyes and tryed to stop them from tearing. he looked at the only place he could see. Right in front of him. The whole pod was shaking and flying at an extremily high speed. As he fell longer, the pod started to get hotter. He watched the temperature gauge go up to 700, 800, 900 degrees, and felt sweat dripping down his body and face. This was the part that was soposed to simulate the pods were dropping into orbit and hitting the atmosphere. As the time raged on, he started to feel light headed. C'mon, I can't quit now. I have to do this. Just for a couple more seconds. The temperature quickly sustained normal temperature again, and it stopped with a thud. The door to the pod flew open and hit the ground. He stepped out with shaky feet and legs and had a sniper rifle thrust into his hands. He looked up at the the training that had given it to him, and looked confused. Can't I have a rest, I just- Does anyone else get a rest on the battlefield son? No! Now get going! Johnny walked away from the officer and cocked his sniper rifle. He had 60 seconds to kill ten grunts, 55 since he had his cheek with the officer. But it didn't matter, he was an artist with a sniper rifle. He zoomed in and even with his shaky vision, he capped a grunt in the head first shot. he moved slowly, aiming at each grunt and taking him down one after another. He got up to the 9th one and still had 15 seconds left. He zoomed out and pointed his sniper rifle down. He needed a rest, he hadn't took a rest since he got out of the pod. He closed his eyes and breathed deeply. He heard the countdown from ten, lookled up, zoomed in, shot the grunt in the head, and handed the sniper rifle to the officer. Done. Not one shot missed. The officer looked at him with a surprised eye and watched him leave the course.

[g3n3ralgore]

that was good. ill pass you. you are now a certified helljumper

[Tucker49]

You have to edit his profile and make him a helljumper, you have to remember! I'll do it for you, but remember next time! And wtf? you can't just say your passed and thats it, you have to give him a grade...... You sure are lacking in a lot of areas, if you can't handle this job, I can easily find a replacement.

[g3n3ralgore]

I though you where supposed to do that. Im rebels to i though it was your job. im just not used to the new site yet.

[Tucker49]

Look, since we both no who Johnny Guns is, you know that you have to grade his training. And you did, but you have to give him a number grade. With the rebels, when you grade they're training, and they become a rank, you have to remember to edit they're profile and make they're custom title they're rank name.

[xTerohx]

READY FOR GRADING:

Teroh suited up. He checked to make sure it was all on right, and it was airtight. Triple checking, he walked to the control room.
"Alright, open the hatch."
"Good luck"
"With that temperature, we'll need it."
"We sir?"
"Me and my ego"
The hatch opened. He walked inside and stood there for a minute.
"Don't you wanna get going?"
"Can't I organize my thoughts and concentrate? Damn."
The hatch closed.
"Just push the button, and stay awake," he thought to himself.
Checking himself for the 4th time, Teroh finally hit the button.
On the com: "What the ****? The buttons broken."
"Uh, hold it for 3 seconds."
"Right."
BAM! The pod was released and he almost fell. Putting his hands on the sides of the pod to stay balanced, it burned.
"MOTHER**** THATS HOT"
"Damn hes blacking out. Perpare a medical team just incase."
"Stay awake. Not too long until it gets really hot. Stay awake. *puff puff* Ok. Blacking out.... Burn yourself to stay awake... damn thats hot. Ok. Temp rising."
Computer: Parachute opening in 5... 4... 3... 2... 1... Parachute opened.
Teroh fell to the floor from the jerk of the parachute. He got back up and it seemed a lot more stable.
Computer: Main chute deploying..
"Well, that wasnt too bad, was it?" His mind seemed to say to him.
"Bah, guess not." Teroh said, only to realise who he was talking to.
WHAM! The pod hit the ground. Teroh rushed out grabbing two grenades and his sniper and battle rifle.
"Hey Sarge."
"Ok, ready? GO!"
Teroh rushed to a rock. Plasma was flying everywhere. Teroh peeked out and saw a grunt standing out in the open.
"That idiot." Teroh thought.
BAM! The grunt went flying, doing backflips. 5 shots left in the magazine. WHAM POW! 2 more flew.
POP! "Shit, how could I miss?"
BAM WHAM! 2 more down.
"**** reloading, gotta grab the BR" Teroh muttered.
He flicked the safety. He decided on 2 shot bursts. Prone, he crawled and saw all 5 grunts advancing.
"Bah, make it 3 shot bursts" Teroh thought.
A plasma shot managed to skin his arm.
Sarge screamed out, "25 SECONDS LEFT"
Teroh set it to 5 shot bursts. Like a machine gun, he sprayed half a magazine, taking 3 down.
"15 seconds. Act fast," his brain screamed.
2 shot bursts. POW. One down. Only one left.
"10 SECONDS," Sarge screamed.
"Hehehe, lets make this guy bleed," his senses told him.
BAM BAM! Two shots to the legs. Mr. Grunt fell like a log. Teroh stood up, giving each grunt 1 more bullet and a couple grenades for luck.
"Very nice work."
"Thank you sir, shooting birds helped."

READY FOR GRADING

[Tucker49]

Is this ready to be graded?

[xTerohx]

READY FOR GRADING

[Tucker49]

8/10. It was good, but try to illustrate more detail in your roleplay. Don't use such words as "BOOM, BAM, and POP" so much. Just try to describe these actions with more detail instead of using single words. It doesn't sound as good as a very descriptive and well thought out roleplay, but don't worry, it looks like your new to freeform and so I don't expect perfection. The training mission was pretty good all in all.

[xTerohx]

admin said:

8/10. It was good, but try to illustrate more detail in your roleplay. Don't use such words as "BOOM, BAM, and POP" so much. Just try to describe these actions with more detail instead of using single words. It doesn't sound as good as a very descriptive and well thought out roleplay, but don't worry, it looks like your new to freeform and so I don't expect perfection. The training mission was pretty good all in all.

Bah i love onomatopeia

[pisbrrr]

As PsiBrrr walks into the room, He hears a voice over the PA
Are you ready for the simulation
Yes
Alright, I'm opening the hatch, stand clear... alright, you can get in
So, PsiBrrr steps into the pod and sits down in the pilot seat,waiting for the button to change from red to green
you ready
Yes
The button then turns green, PsiBrrr lefts his hand and reaches for the button, when he pushed it, nothing happened, then all of a sudden, the pod lurched, and the altimeter started to go count faster and faster and faster,then it started to get hot, PsiBrrr took his hand away from the side of the pod quickly
Ow, thats hot
The pod started to cool, then it lurched once again, and a voice came over The PA
Alright, your done your drop simulation, now it's time for fight training
PsiBrrr was walking down the hall while listening to rookies talking about how hard the pod simulation was.
Over the PA, we heard voice
Will PsiBrrr please come to fight training
PsiBrrr then arrives at fight training, he goes over to the weapons rack where a soldier is standing waiting
Alright, welcome to fight training, you Will have to kill ten grunts in 10 grunts to pass this section of your training, hear, take these weapons
PsiBrrr pick up the battle rifle and sniper from the weapons rack and heads for the door, from what he's heard from others,that the opponents were grunts, and from his training, he knew that grunts like to stay together, the door open and PsiBrrr enters the field, waiting for the grunts to be released, then he hears a buzzer go off, he hears the grunts wisper, he see two together, he fires at them, kills them both, he then ducks behind a rock for cover, a covenant sniper fires right pass his head, just missing, he pulls out the sniper,he then takes a dive from one rock to another firing at grunt, he misses twice but the third hits the grunt, three grunts come out of no-where and started firing, PsiBrrr then slides behind a rock still being fired on, PsiBrrr then rolls out from behind the rock and kills two of the three, the third grunt runs away screaming, when PsiBrrr turns the corner and there was the rest of the grunts, PsiBrrr tarts firing on them and hit two of them, killing them, but he still had three left, and time was running out, PsiBrrr pull out the sniper for some reasons, rolls out while kneeling and firers one shot then reloads after no scoping a grunt in the head, he then pulls the battle rifle out again and kills the last two grunts, the buzzer goes off and a voice comes over the PA
Great work, we'll see how you did and contact you later

[xTerohx]

ten grunts in 10 grunts to pass this section of your training

HAHAHAHHAHA 10 grunts in ten grunts??? HAHAHAHHAHA nice typo.

[Tucker49]

8/10. Pretty well done, you could of added more detail to the pod simulation part, but nevertheless, it was good. But in the future, please make your spelling and grammar better.

[pisbrrr]

Ooops, I will make sure to spell check